Friday, February 26, 2010

Radial Posters

I'm sure that these are not finished, and I may even come up with a new one to replace one of these, we'll see how much time I have.  But any critiques and suggestions on these are very much appreciated.


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  1. Mollie McGillFebruary 26, 2010 at 10:24 PM

    I like how the first one ended up! It flows nicely.

    I'm also a huge fan of the display font in the landscape poster. The only thing that irks me a little is the placement of the "will you be there..." text blocl. The whole poster is arranged really symmetrically and it seems like the beginning of that block should be as close to the peacock's head as the "Austin city limits" block. It could just be me, though.

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  2. Adam MendalaFebruary 26, 2010 at 10:32 PM

    Thanks! Thats exactly the kind of thing I wouldn't notice after working on it for an hour.

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  3. Mollie McGillFebruary 26, 2010 at 11:47 PM

    haha i know the feeling!!

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  4. Sara FabrykaFebruary 27, 2010 at 7:52 AM

    These are both great, Adam. I think landscape orientation lends itself more to this system, but you're vertical one is very well done. The only thing that bothers me in the top one is the little ball of light above her head. I'm just not sure what it's supposed to be or if it's really necessary. Just a thought! Good job, though!

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